Comments : I want to be...???

  • I really like this good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Unknown

    Niice! I liked it!!!
    good work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Patience

    Free-style poetry is my weakness. I just love when I find a piece that is strong, meaningful and well presented.

    I absolutly love the ending:

    just remember that what
    lies behind you and what lies before
    you is nothing like what lies
    inside you.

    This last stanze is so powerful and deep. It is just brilliant.

    Great Job Court.

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    I want that too!!!! it would be nice!!! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Poetic Justice

    This poem expressed such a deep, rough emotion. I was reading your poem and I could visiualize a scene. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    I liked this alot! really motivates me :]