by Thomas
Excellent. Such good imagery and my favorite part was this: |
This is one amazing poem filled with awesome imagery. |
Oh wow. This was amazing. I mean, the poem was cool before the end note, but after I read it all I could think was, what a flippin' creative thing to do! :D Five. |
by Rachel RTVW
I think it starts off a bit choppy. I do love your personification of Mother Nature, the wind and rain. Excellent word choice.It was nice that you added the author's note as it gives the reader insight to your inspiration. The poem was creative. Had I not already cast my 3 votes for the weekly contest, I would have nominated this. |
by fearose
I like how this is based on a real-life experience and yet it's so otherworldly. The dialogue is amazing. I feel as if it's a dream, so serene and then it turns so wrong. Your word choice brings it all to life and invokes the most vibrant feelings. I really, really like this one. Brilliant job. 5/5 |