Comments : She Speaks To Us

  • 16 years ago

    by Thomas

    Excellent. Such good imagery and my favorite part was this:

    "Thunder raging.
    Lightning striking.
    Winds engage in conversation;
    spoken to us with the voices of the rain."

    Great use of personification of the wind. Very descriptive and it flowed so well together. Another brilliant write, and scary to think of a prediction like that.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This is one amazing poem filled with awesome imagery.

    Hopefully you stay safe & those tornadoes they expect don't come.

    Stay safe. :]

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Oh wow. This was amazing. I mean, the poem was cool before the end note, but after I read it all I could think was, what a flippin' creative thing to do! :D Five.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I think it starts off a bit choppy. I do love your personification of Mother Nature, the wind and rain. Excellent word choice.It was nice that you added the author's note as it gives the reader insight to your inspiration. The poem was creative. Had I not already cast my 3 votes for the weekly contest, I would have nominated this.

  • 16 years ago

    by fearose

    I like how this is based on a real-life experience and yet it's so otherworldly. The dialogue is amazing. I feel as if it's a dream, so serene and then it turns so wrong. Your word choice brings it all to life and invokes the most vibrant feelings. I really, really like this one. Brilliant job. 5/5