Hey...nice poem. I liked it alot, very sad and well written. Hope you'll keep writing
Luv,

-Blue ^_~

kool poem, but it was so sad!
i no it happenes everyday, and its horrible. ur poem was really realistic, so keep writin! l8r

Wow that poem , made me feel like i was there. that poor family. I wish life never was that way.

I would be honored if you would check out my poetry, your a talented poet. i can tell that from the vast amount of poems youve written and the excellet ratings you recieved. im going to put you on my favorites. so that over time i will eventually read all your work. thx your friend Randy

Another fantastic and thought provoking poem from the famous Danielle Whitaker.
I love your work so bad, you truly inspire me to write xx

Once again this is another very, very powerful poem. i enjoyed it a lot and abuse has always made me mad. you wrote beautifully and you really put it out there well.

~Alicia~

Incredible work. I love these messages disguised as fantastic poems. You are a master at that. It pulled me in and wouldn't let go. Great work once again. You are a marvelous poet. I love all your work. Everytime I read one of your poems I learn, or rethink something. *more hugs for my little sister today.*
Thank you.
-Peace

omg i kno dads suck.. i havnt seen my mom since i was 2..no wonder y she left!?!?!

these things happen everyday to people, and those who think they have it bad sometimes don't. their are people out their who have it 10 times worse. but i love your poem very much. it meant a lot to me just because i went through the exact same thing with my father. keep on writing and stay true. IM me if you wanna at UnspokenRequest3

It was a great poem and all,
but I don't get the last verse.
Oh well...
Good job!

I love all your poems.... u have an amazing gift... this was sad, but had a happy ending.... was Breath taking... yet still gave me life.... made my stomach turn and some of the thoughts, and still freed my mind... i loved this.... i don't know how anyone could give it less then a 5.... truely amazing... It pulled me in and made me feel the pain of that little girl.

-Tyler-

Thank you all so much for your comments...It means alot...

To all the people who asked why I wrote it, I dont' know. It just came into my head one night. It happens all the time and it's a good topic to write about. I'm very happy that so many people liked it. To the people who didn't, I'm sorry if you didn't. I can't please everyone...

Also, THIS DIDN'T HAPPEN TO ME.

hey i have read alot of your poems and they are al really touching, keep writing because you have real talent and i bet your talent will take you real far. hope your ok, luv kim xXxXx

hey i have read alot of your poems and they are all really touching, keep writing because you have real talent and i bet your talent will take you real far. hope your ok, luv kim xXxXx

Hey gurl,this is yet another amazin poem i truely admire your work .you are a awesome writer!

Wow explicit poem! :) It really gave me details..it's like I could see myself there...It's sad that this really does happen in the world. Keep writing plez! :) <3

that is a really good poem, really sad and i agree somthing should be done for allt hese people suffereing out there.
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i think you write better than me, but i just wanted to thank you so much for your awesome comments. they made me smile ear to ear.

i think you write better than me, but i just wanted to thank you so much for your awesome comments. they made me smile ear to ear.

Wow great poem very sad and touching but loved it.5/5