Its a very good poem. dang that sucks. i hate it when u love some1 and they like some1 else and it seems that the guy likes u, and it just gets u really down =[

..........I close me eyes? (me should be my btw)

and this is my fav line:

He talks to me,
can't he tell that I'm melting faster than ice?

^very good word choice. i havnt seen one like it. so its speacial sorta =]

5/5 keep writing!

~tia