This is actually really good for a first poem. have you written stuff before, or is this just...wam "i'm already great at this"? XD

The rhyming scheme's off, but eh, i don't care. I liked the purpose and the point. It could use more emotion ((but then again, so could this comment. lol)) but it's definitely a great place to start. ^.^

4/5

An inspirational write in which i truly enjoyed nice job once again. It was short but i still got the clear crystal message

Another good poem. I like how this is a 'growing up' poem. The only thing I saw wrong with it was, in the last line, shouldn't it be "woman" instead of "women"? I hope that you enjoy this site and good luck in the future with your poems!!

Good Work, Keep it up!

Oh wow, i absolutely loved this piece. it had such a beautiful message and had a really big impact.

it was such a strong and powerful piece, filled with so much passion, you did such an amazing job, this was just perfect, it was such a unique poem. you really have got a stunning style of writing, keep it up, you have a lot of talent!!!! take care, 5/5
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shellaine

I liked this poem, the ending was the best bit. We all learn from our own mistakes. Written beautifully, 5/5. Em