This was a deep poem. you did a wonderful job at expressing yourself.

I rather have you as a friend
The not have you at all,
Cuz I need you to be here
So I can get up after I fall.

i liked those lines the most. they really stuck out to me. especially the last 2 lines. i can say i feel the same about someone too. great to kno someone can relate to what your feeling. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.