Comments : Little Broken Record ((Is this your someday?))

  • 16 years ago

    by Coldstone

    Nice one i like this stanza the most:
    No one laughs with the record,
    she's broken, people are just annoyed.
    Fixes others hearts with songs,
    while her own problems, she avoids.
    Keep writing:)

  • 16 years ago

    by blind soul

    Good job that was great! i loved it i agree with the stanza with coldstone really nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Gosh, i think i have tears
    dang good poem
    enough said