Running back to you

Bt i jst wonder,,,wht u do wen ur parents r turnin u into sumthin dark n blue,,,u dint had good frends,, or far dat matter even a shoulder where u can rest ur head jst for while seekin comfort,,,
in d end u realize ur all alone in dis wide world,,,,

Bt i jst wonder,,,what u do wen ur parents r turnin u into sumthin dark n blue,,,u dint had good frends,, or far dat matter even a shoulder where u can rest ur head jst for while seekin comfort,,,
in d end u realize ur all alone in dis wide world,,,,

Very emotional indeed! a poem from utter loneliness I guess. Very well constructed. Good one!

Awww for a sad poem it has a cute ending! wish it was a little longer, but awesome job! :D

This poem is really sweet, it's sad, but sweet in the end.

I don't really have anything bad to say about it except in the last line of the second stanza i think it could have been slightly longer to work better rhythm, and that this line 'Mom,Dad I feel like," should have a space between Mom, Dad.

xoxo -Lauren