I Can Hear You Calling

by Lemonbread   Jun 6, 2008


In a place deeper then bliss
Is where I await deaths kiss
I hear him outside my door
As I lay broken on the floor

I shed no tear, I know my fate
I knew from that very date
It was going to happen anyway
So why keep bad thoughts at bay

So I lay my head back down
And sure enough happiness drowns
But as I feel death's weapon drop
I can hear you calling, and I want all this to stop

TM - LiquidSugar

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "In a place deeper then bliss
    Is where I await deaths kiss
    I hear him outside my door
    As I lay broken on the floor"

    ^Great opening stanza, really is amazing!

    The flow and rhyming choice was great, and this whole poem has so much emotion and meaning in it, so well done!

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