Nice 1..

Keep it up..

Best wishz... Karan

Through these teary eyes
I want to smile once again
Gathering my shattered dreams
I want to shield them once again
=> This is so emotional.. I feel so sad and sorry for you..

Squeezed under the load of time
I want my wishes to bloom once again
In my silent painful voice
I want to ingnite that spark once again
=> I hear the writer is strong.. She doesn't want to give up... Even it is dark, there is light...

Destiny was never my friend
Never could see
who is right and who is fiend

Now when I want to
Travel the forgotten route
The moments that are left
is so minute...
=> I like the words you use in your last stanza. I like the expression "travel the forgotten route." Nice work, keep it up. :)

Wow, you should meet Gulzaar/Javed Akhtar asap.

This is beautiful poem dear, your selection of words carries lot of pain in them, loved it

all the best and take care