by NinjaGirl Jun 6, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
Rewriting the World |
by Lizaveta
The book idea is great, and i like how it's connected with the title |
by Mister 47
I love it , i like the way you epress so easy and ligth to understand , |
by Lonely Rider
Excellent work guys... wonderful write... |
OH I LOVED THE LAST THREE STANZAS, it was like two people talking back and forth. Yall really know how to bring out a collab. I thought transition had a little trouble at the begining but yall did a great job 5/5 |
The flawless flow of this poem delivered a powerful reflection of history which if heedded by all could influence the future |