Haha hell yeah we rock =D
5/5

Cheers xo

The flawless flow of this poem delivered a powerful reflection of history which if heedded by all could influence the future

well done

OH I LOVED THE LAST THREE STANZAS, it was like two people talking back and forth. Yall really know how to bring out a collab. I thought transition had a little trouble at the begining but yall did a great job 5/5

Excellent work guys... wonderful write...

the message it sent...the description... wonderful...

"So if you dare, come join me
And together, let us burn the words
The words written down in blood and ink
And together, write our own little world,

Where we can be together, as one,
The two of us, just you and I
And we will be each others' company
And protection until the day we die."

^^ loved this stanza... it brings the feeling of togetherness... i liked it..

keep coming out with such good writes...

I love it , i like the way you epress so easy and ligth to understand ,

i tghink i will read more about your work !!

The book idea is great, and i like how it's connected with the title
though it's a collab, all stanzas are in the same style
if to imagine that this is a conversation it's just awesome!
i have a suggestion: why don't you make it a "dialogue poem"?
like this:

(Name 1): Not another fairy tale ending
Or something pulled from a book
Not another fair well sending
With one quick backward look.

(Name 2): It always seems the same
Everyday, everyone, everyway
When the sun went and came
I wish I can throw everything away,

(Name 1): I wish I could throw away everything,
All these meaningless notes and words
Because we both know that forever
These notes and feelings will go unheard.

and so on.
i just think it would look more eye-catching this way and also the dialgue form would express he main idea of the poem
but of course that's just a suggestion
and the poem is really good and talented the way it is
5/5
awww and its an awesome way to show your friendship in a collab poem.