by Ashleigh Skye Jun 6, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Don't forget to cross out the eyes, |
by Brittany C
The rhyming was good and strong. But the peom could do with out the repetition, it gets old after a while. 5/5 |
by JaM
I liked the poem...I woldn;t quite say that I like the style as I'm not one for repetitiveness, however as far as the style goes...you did great. |