Best poem by you BY FAR. I'm absolutely in love with it. Favorites, that's for sure.
I have no criticism for this poem. I noticed with the other free versed poem I'd read that it seemed to be your best 'style'. But, this out ranks any best style. It's your best poem (at least from the 10 I've read).
Kudos, Ashleigh.
For vivid imagery, vivid emotion, amazing and outstanding flow!