by Ashleigh Skye Jun 6, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
The single sun and the single moon, |
by JaM
This is an amazing poem. I really like how easily it can be related to-a very common issue, so well expressed. Your imagery and description of the situation and the details it includes is very well done. It starts off nice as everything does and ends the way most do. Great work 5/5! |