Wow, Gabby... this poem honestly made my jaw drop. When I read the title, I wasn't expecting this at all. You totally caught me off guard. But it was a great poem, I have to say. It was very intense and so many different emotions were clashing together the entire time. You made it so realistic. It gave me shivers when I pictured this entire poem playing out in my head.

If a girl dies tomorrow, will you hang your head?
You promised her forever and a day.
Will you cry simple tears and proclaim your love?
My dear, you'd be far too late.

^ I believe that was my favorite stanza this time. I just love how you worded everything together. It was so sad... but at the same time, it really makes you think. What will happen after you die? That's something that none of us will ever know. The last line of this stanza also hits you really hard. It's just so true. I just loved it hun, very excellent.

This entire poem was just so creative. You used tons of different elements and put them all together in one poem. It was realistic, relatable, intense, and it just makes you step a step back and really think about things. Next time I see someone sitting alone on a bench, I think I'll go talk to them. That's what this poem has inspired me to do. No one should feel alone. And I'll make sure I can help as many people as I can. Great job, hunni. I'm very proud of you. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~