Just Like Rothko

by emma   Jun 6, 2008


We're losing our grip on reality, baby
you've been making this life so... dizzy
the things you say!
the things you do!
you're explosive, like a firework
fizz-fizz-fizzy

you're so mean, loud, honest, angry
you break my heart and you don't even know
let's live forever!
let's dance all night!
your eyes... they're so colourful
just like Rothko

you can work magic, make things hazy
you talk and my ears bend closer to your words
we're two stars!
we're so alive!
we're just so very in love,
two love-nerds

lol this is kinda rubbish, it's a first draft. i love this guy :)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I agree, just work on the flow, otherwise this is pretty good. Keep writing and take care! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by TormentedSoul

    Its not bad at all for a first draft. alittle more work with the flow and it will be perfect 5/5