Im really sorry about your dad. your poem is reallly good keep writting and hang in there
great job!!!

Good Job! I like this one...i'm really sorry about your dad!

This poem is about my grandfather, not my father.
<3. R.I.P Papa, well all miss you.

I am so sorry about your loss, I know what its like to lose someone that you love. but just hang in there and stay strong, well written, your grandfather would be proud!!
***HUG***

Melissa May....I am sorry about your grandfather. I recently lost my grandfather also, so I feel your pain. I know its hard but you have to hang in there. I love your poem and that is why I rated it a 5. I think that it has alot of passion and truth to it! Keep up the good work! And if you need a friend to talk to, I'm always here!

Wow. The flow was flawless, the message was beatiful, and the words were perfect. I usually tell people what they could do to improve their poem, but I can't do it with your poem because its ... perfect.
-Lilly