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by Melissa May Jun 6, 2008 category : Sadness, depression / grieving, loss
One more day with you gone Seems like years, it seems so long I think of days in the past Just one moment, I want it to last Thinking of you, And what you went though I miss you so much, Some times I don’t know what to do. As the days go by, Ill try not to cry. I love you more then anything. For this is not a lie.
by Poet on the Piano
Awww....how sweet! Here are some thoughts: "Some times I donâ??t know what to do." Just delete that a??? thing. "As the days go by, Ill try not to cry. I love you more then anything. For this is not a lie." Ill should be I'll. Otherwise, nice job, I really like the ending, ties everything together nicely. :)