Comments : Wishing You Where Here.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Awww....how sweet! Here are some thoughts:

    "Some times I donâ??t know what to do."

    Just delete that a??? thing.

    "As the days go by,
    Ill try not to cry.
    I love you more then anything.
    For this is not a lie."

    Ill should be I'll. Otherwise, nice job, I really like the ending, ties everything together nicely. :)