by JMoniqueBlynne Jun 6, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I spent so long on you |
by claire
I like this poem a lot, but the "thee" doesnt seem to fit the general style. also, that quote doesnt exactly warn one away from love, so i'm not sure how you meant to tie that in . . . anyway, i like the idea, and the butterflies turn to ashes part was such a beautiful metaphor. that what caught my eye -great idea :) |