Comments : A Faint Voice Whispers (Rondeau)

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nice job on the rondeau....Love the imagery of the whispering darkness and the secrets held by the night.

  • 16 years ago

    by Trying to hold on

    Corinne, this really echoed through me, first stanza powerfully wripped out the emotions, stepping the reader straight in,

    "Somewhere a faint voice whispers in the night
    Every cruel secret it's been hiding from the light"

    Vividly continuing throughout this piece the other stanzas held the flow and rhythm gliding the chilling whispers of your words surrounding the existence of a screen with letters on it to a real thought, a real moment, given real life, so much more than words, what I call "words written with art using strength from the heart"
    Fantastic, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Really strong!! ur good!!

  • 16 years ago

    by gracey grey

    A subtle poem, but I loved the metaphors you used here.Keep it up!