Again forced rhyming:

^Now it's time for us to surpass.^

^And we won't stop even at night^

This line where you forced the rhyme is not even believable.

Simply worded and the flow was not consistent.

Wow this is an amazing poem..... i like this poem.... =)

Like always, your poems are beautifully written ^^ The flow was great and the use of numbers like 'Strike one, two, three' makes it seem like your actually there counting the score.

I've got no critisism for you on this one ^_^ 5/5

-Hari

Really cool poem. Flowed great! I almost felt like I was actually at the game!
~Kayla

I like this poem. It is very easy for those who have played baseball or softball to understand and your wording allows those who have not played the sport to understand and see what it is like. I liked the rhyming and it kept the flow going strong through out the whole poem. 5/5

A good poem yet i feel the rhyming was a little forced, yet with a few changes you could make this poem great. Nice descriptions given to =]

I really loved this,its like ur expressing ur love through a baseball game.(in words)
excellent
keep it up
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It feels a little thrown together to me. If you went back and cleaned up the rhyme and flow a bit I think you would have a great ode to baseball.