Comments : Let The Pieces Fall Where They May.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I was thinking of the love is a puzzle contest and kept thinking, okay where's the line, it's here somewhere, but it wasn't. Some of the ending lines seemed similar to the love puzzle title.

    I liked this poem. It was refreshing like a face mask or taking off your socks on a really hot day, lol. It was exhaling knowing everything is going to be okay. I'll give it a high four, but I can't, so it's a five.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mallory

    I know that whatever your decision is,
    Is what you believe is best for not only you, but me.

    Take the second is out it would make sense as...
    I know that whatever your decision is,
    What you believe is best for not only you, but me.
    but nice job though 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by paths of peace

    (:omg! i swear! we live the same life in this type of relationship... i understand and relate to every word!!!(:
    plz mssg me!!!!!

    --janet(:

  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    I really liked this. You've described perfectly everything that I felt before I told the guy who I love, how I felt about him. Waiting is never fun, but sometimes you just have to. And, of course, there is always the chance that you've been waiting for no reason because in the end, the other person doesn't feel the same way. Overall; this piece is beautifully written, and amazingly honest about everything. I loved it.

    5/5

    ``Briana