The girls love you, I promise you that! You will always be their father and no one can strip you of that. You have all the time in the world to make it right. I know you well and that you wont give up this fight. You have the strength to get through this hard time. And at the end love from all three girls is what you will find! |
Wow, this must have been really hard 4 you to write but in this poem 1 can see that you are a genuine person and although you have done wrong, you have got good intentions ad a heart of gold which aims at setting things right!! The reader can clearly see how sorry you are and that you are truly hurting inside, stay strong and things will all come right i the end!! |
by Jenn
Wow!! That was strong!! It shows a lot of emotion and I really liked reading it!! thanks for the comment and keep up the awesome work!! |
by RetroRavey
I think this poem is rather excellent. I like the story behind it. good work. 5/5 |
by Dark Secrets
It's beutiful, the poem... it would be nice if you just appoligised, it might not help you or them to move on, but it will give you great relief to just admit you were wrong, and I'm sure your girls and their mothers will be happy that you said that cuz then they'll know that you have a heart and that you care... that is enough to unbreak any heart. |