by maria Jun 7, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
In this night |
Excellent piece, this was so magical and made me want to live in that world! My only suggestion would be to capitalize all your "i"s, otherwise you did a wonderful job. The piece was really brought alive to the reader, it was a joy to read. |
by Meena Krish
Very good! I can see this place and the |
I love it. Very mystical! I can so relate to your poem. Sometimes I think this is my world too. Keep it up! |