I love it. Very mystical! I can so relate to your poem. Sometimes I think this is my world too. Keep it up!

Very good! I can see this place and the
happiness it brings..liked the read.
Take care.

Excellent piece, this was so magical and made me want to live in that world! My only suggestion would be to capitalize all your "i"s, otherwise you did a wonderful job. The piece was really brought alive to the reader, it was a joy to read.

Take care and God Bless!

~MaryAnne