Comments : The Sunset's Where You'll Find Me

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Definitely not the poem i expected from you today, jesse.

    but dangit. now i'm just glad i can stop reading pretty poems about the ocean..get to go to mexico...hoorah.

    anyway:

    Can you swim but not get wet?

    ^ you can drown but not get wet. So i don't know if that's quite the same thing, but that's my answer.

    Beautiful poem, jesse. painted a lovely image.

  • 16 years ago

    by CalGirl

    Its a great poem jesse, and just like gabby said, i didn't expect this from u...

    i didn't know u could write so beautifully about nature...

    well, anyways, it awesome, no fawesome, so keep it up!

    ~Sophie~