Comments : It's funny

  • 16 years ago

    by rebeccasarah

    Woah. This is a really neat, little poem. I love it. I think its so true and well written.
    One suggestion though, perhaps you should switch the underestimating and the overwhelming? Idk it just seems to flow better that way, well to me anyways.
    But like I said, Great poem! (:

  • 16 years ago

    by 0osomedayo0

    Thanks : ]] ill look at it again im glad u like it