Please Critique, and be as blunt as you need to be. I must get better ^.^!!

Awwww the last part was so CUTE! :) 5/5

~tia

My favorite stanza was the last two, sadly we all want attention from the ones we love but then we also seeem to threaten them. Love what a harsh game 5/5

This is an interesting poem - most people never admit that they loved from someone but didnt think about how the other person felt. i like it =)

Wonderful piece
i llllllllllove it

I love it ..and i totally agree with danny...itz very touching...and very well written ......i love it! 5/5

Omg!! you are such an amazing writer!! 5/5 great poem! keep up the good work! i all around loved it!

Thanks All ^-^