This poem was beautiful, Monique. It actually sounded very mature, the word usage and whatnot. also the way you chose to have the flow was lovely.

but to this day, i will say it:

it wasn't your fault.

The rhyme and the meter in this poem are nearly perfect but the theme like me is not

You write as though your salvation depends on it. The poem's theme reflects a popular theme is we must always be perfect to achieve salvation. The truth reflects that nobody is perfect and your dignity value and worth cannot be earned by good deeds or lost through any failures. No one that walked this earth was without sin but the Son of God and he paid the price. If you accept the things you cannot change you will find the courage to love and accept the divine nature that forgives all sin
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