What I Am Inside!

by Jack Nightengale   Jun 7, 2008


I sit in this lonely, isolated place,
It's cold and dark, I chill everytime I take a breath!
Only one has ever seen my face,
To this day I still don't fear Death!

He Thought that he was brave,
When he crossed me, he dug his own hole!
And still I can feel that same Crave,
The crave After I snatched his Soul!

He who was so Naive,
He who was so Bliss,
He dug His own Grave,
After he found out That I am Death, I am Anubis!

At this time he was trembling,
Running away to find som place to hide!
He was finally disassembling,
And this, this is Who I Am Inside!

***Kris, Warrior For All!***

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  • 14 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    And this, this is Who I Am Inside! in a way you touched a soft spot in me. but anyway i really liked this poem . darkness sometimes consumes us all and you present it beautifully.

    HS

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I really liked this it was really good i have my own dark poems but i dnt think they can compare to this! I liked it great job!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This sounds very good.. I don't pretend to understand it completely but I get good feelings about reading... Like a reading a fairytale... :D

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I don't understand that much in dark poems but i like this one

    the end was great
    good job

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