I don't understand that much in dark poems but i like this one

the end was great
good job

This sounds very good.. I don't pretend to understand it completely but I get good feelings about reading... Like a reading a fairytale... :D

I really liked this it was really good i have my own dark poems but i dnt think they can compare to this! I liked it great job!5/5

And this, this is Who I Am Inside! in a way you touched a soft spot in me. but anyway i really liked this poem . darkness sometimes consumes us all and you present it beautifully.

HS