The prisoner of your exile

by Heba   Jun 7, 2008


After we were separated
And our relationship was faded
I was your most hated
You were killing me with torture
You were like an aggressive monster
Tearing me apart as you were a wild vulture
There is no part of you from the human's nature

Because of you, I kept my self away from people
Thinking that I am bad
Put people in troubles and get them mad
I was the prisoner of your exile
Like I am the guilty in your unfair trial
You kept me there alone sitting in silence
Looking with my hazel eyes
Behind those iron bars
At that wide sky, that was full of stars
But it seemed to me as if they were deep scars
I was calling for help ,giving out loud cries
I was spending my time complaining to the moon
That lightened my jail with it's yellow light
While they were crawling to me, those shades of the dark night

I was waiting there for someone shall appear
Who can save me from you
And vanish my worst fear
I was waiting for my salvation
And get rid of your indignation
But I think that my trend
Is getting closer to the end

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoveTear

    Mashallah it's amazing i really love it i was thinking those days 2write a poem almost the same as urs,to express the feelings felt under a "tyrant" under his command !
    Great work 5/5 i'll try 2do also mine :)

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I can see that you suffer from friendship alot just like me but you should not keep like this. friendship meant to bring happiness and support. find that friendship because what you are in is not called friendship

    good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    This is good very good, very strong! I love it! Awesome job Heba!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow, loved that poem. I loved the words that you used. They made it really powerful and effective! well done and thanks 4 commenting on my poems :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Bravo... *woot* sometimes I feel exactly the same with my parents