In A Trance For A Dance

by gracey grey   Jun 7, 2008


Dance with me this last dance
for I am here by chance

Twist me flip me tease me

Shake me till all feathers fall
before dawn makes its new call

Sway me thrill me groove me

Make me believe I exist
even if I still persist

Put me in a trance, prance me around

I am yours and you are mine
together we look divine

So come and dance to this tune I love most
for it won't be long before I get lost

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  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Makes me think of dancing with my love,holding her tight and close Hmmm... gotta go

    loved the poem

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is a charming piece with lovely rhyme and imagery. You have sucessfully managed to portray an enchanting moody dance, sulty even!!

    I wasn't sure about the last rhyme..
    Lost and most doesn't rhyme!

    Well done

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is a charming piece with lovely rhyme and imagery. You have sucessfully managed to portray an enchanting moody dance, sulty even!!

    I wasn't sure about the last rhyme..
    Lost and most doesn't rhyme!

    Well done

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    That was very beautiful,
    loved the rhyming. And all
    together it was very moving, and
    hearfelt piece. Great job! 5/5.

    -mandy :)

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