That was very beautiful,
loved the rhyming. And all
together it was very moving, and
hearfelt piece. Great job! 5/5.

-mandy :)

This is a charming piece with lovely rhyme and imagery. You have sucessfully managed to portray an enchanting moody dance, sulty even!!

I wasn't sure about the last rhyme..
Lost and most doesn't rhyme!

Well done

Michael

This is a charming piece with lovely rhyme and imagery. You have sucessfully managed to portray an enchanting moody dance, sulty even!!

I wasn't sure about the last rhyme..
Lost and most doesn't rhyme!

Well done

Michael

Makes me think of dancing with my love,holding her tight and close Hmmm... gotta go

loved the poem

Grant