Aww its soo nice!!!!!! by nice i mean like depressingly nice but still....nice! i luffs it alot my love, keep writing!!! or typing for that matter heehee. :)))

Lol thankks buddy lol.

***I gave so much and got none back, The lingering hope was what kept me on track. I said it wasn't your fault, and i was perfectly fine, i claimed nothing could break this heart of mine. You believed every word, no lies you heard, and I Just healed in silence.**
^^aww!!..i think alot of guys dont realize our feelings. we say onething but mean another. if they'd look into our eyes they'd know the truth...

***I know you regret, and that should be enough,you cause sorrow, then repent, thats seems balanced and such. I told you i loved you, and I got no replies. You stood by to watch the tears fall from my eyes.***
^^ i love that. alot of guys dont like tears, and dont know how to handle them, and that angers us even more because we want them to take us in their arms, and hold us when we r down......right?

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I told you, don't worry, you've made me strong, I realized we truly just don't belong. My eyes still do water, the tears tend to fall, I told you I loved you,and expected nothing at all......... ****
^^ aw that was a real sad, but i loved the way u ended it!

great poem!..fabulous poet..Aly

I have a story similar to this called the lovers ride. this poems was a excellent poem for me to read, lol. Well hope you read that one, but if not, I'll keep reading yours. lol.
Poetry Knight

Great Poem. I loved every line! 5/5.

This is one amazingly writen poem I love every word of it and I can so relate to it rifht now it tells a sad story of love and hurt keep the great poems coming 5/5

Tammi,

This is a great poem... 5/5. awesome!! i love it britt

This is a very lovely piece there Britt! You are very talented! Awesome job!

This poem was absolutely superb. 5/5

I love this.
Great job =]

Wow !! You've done a great job with this poem. I absolutely love it.
Great rhyme and use of words. The structure is really good, and the whole poem is written straight from the heart which makes it more wonderful.
Keep up the good work.
5/5