Wow, this poem is very fantastic. you really were good in describtions because you used lots od adjectives. nice poem.

Wow, that was amazingly written and its true that people are negligent and don't realize the harm that their actions have on the environment, I'm a big time nerd when it comes to animal rights, been vegetarian 4 almost 6 years and am anti any products that come from animals. The world really needs to understand what they are doing and if they continue to ignore the facts then there will soon be no beauty left. well done. This is really important subject matter that people need to be made more aware of!!!

Lolits peacful and calming it makes me think im really there!

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Wow. its so great youu care abut these things greatt job.

Hey this is such a beautiful poem... with a beautiful meaning meaning attached to it... I really loved it.. Even Im concerned about the deforestation and hunting...

'With nothing to offer but fur
The cheetah surrenders as she collapses
One less cheetah for the war
One more soul drains out like molasses'

^^ the plight of cheetah is so wonderfully described...

'So please don't litter
And please don't waste
Because one can put a splinter
In an animals place'

^^ this is touching and very meaningful...
Im glad to wrote on this topic...

Excellent write..

Great poem and great topic

Interesting

Wow..i really like this poem..and its good of u to help out...and i like monkeys..now i feel hecka bad cuz i never thought of that..but yea great poem, keep up the good work..5/5

This one needs work..the rhymes are all over the place. the flow is off and i just dont like it that much. i will give it a 3/5

Your voice is reaching the world. This is he most descriptive, but true, and strongly based poem i've read about something like this. You could change the world with this one little thing.
Humans, we are greedy, but we haven't always been dominate. The power got away from us. I agree with your opinions. And your emotions toward the subject.
Flawless!

Lexie