I really like the words you use in this poem it makes me think of the story behind the poem

Another great poem, your words truly touch me! I liked how you repeated the first line again in the third, nice job! :)

My memories oft take me there

Do you mean often?

Ooo you repeated it again. I suppose that's just the way it is being said? Whatever works. :)

Great poem. I love it. I love how you used repetitions in select lines. It made the flow of the poem work and just made the poem great. Great job, five out of five.