This is really good. it had a lot of emotion to it. i wish i could write as good as you. the way you say things. it sounds a lot better than mine do. great job!! haha

I really like this, the title was good too! This is a cool poem, your emotion and usage of words was incredible in this poem! Nice work!

Short poem, but you did use the title like I expected. :] I liked it. Cool imagery indeed. I must agree with you on that one. I don't know what else you could do to make this poem better, possibly make it longer? Expand on your topic more? I like longer poems. :] hehe. 5/5 though :) Nice work!

I liked it.

It kind of reminded me of science while I was reading it. Haha. Maybe I'm just weird, but I thought it was pretty good.

But my nerves are too lazy
And exert no effort
`` That was really pretty unique. I've never heard it before.

Keep writing!

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