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by Jodie Phillips   Jun 8, 2008


What is happening to me?
Do I choose to only see what I want to see?
The truth, I just can't comprehend
On myself I can no longer depend.

Why can't I find the strength from within?
Sometimes it's there but it's never enough to let me win
When will this end, please tell me so?
And erase this feeling that's embedded in my soul.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Not a bad write overall, I think many can relate to what you're saying, you just need to work on your flow.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    I've found it somehow relevant. It happens to everyone at some point of time. Poetically it can be better as I think. Overall I would say it's good.

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    P.s. I SUCK AT SPELLING LOL

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Your poems make you think so many people
    can relate but you have a nack of putting
    it in a unguie way. I like. 5/5 as always
    I finally relize that as a addict all my own
    strenght is gone I now depend on my
    higher power to get me through hard
    choices. my family is that higher power
    and I use thier love and strenght to get me
    throught any urges or whatever. It took
    a long time to figure that out but our life is
    finally worth living

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    Now thats what poems are for.

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