Very moving, and it gives you
something to think about. I absolutely
adore all your poems, so real and refreshing.
You could get published and make millions off of
your poems, haha. But really, you have an
amazing talent! Another great poem, 5/5!!!

-mandy :)

Wow ur very good, good word choice and it was a very moving poem it explains excalty how i feel.

I really like this poem, especially because it is easy to relate to. Just thought though that 'Do I choses' should be 'Do I choose', and 'On myself I no can know longer depend' should have the 'no' and 'know' the other way round! - Both just silly things, overall I really like it. 5/5

Now thats what poems are for.

Your poems make you think so many people
can relate but you have a nack of putting
it in a unguie way. I like. 5/5 as always
I finally relize that as a addict all my own
strenght is gone I now depend on my
higher power to get me through hard
choices. my family is that higher power
and I use thier love and strenght to get me
throught any urges or whatever. It took
a long time to figure that out but our life is
finally worth living

P.s. I SUCK AT SPELLING LOL

I've found it somehow relevant. It happens to everyone at some point of time. Poetically it can be better as I think. Overall I would say it's good.

Not a bad write overall, I think many can relate to what you're saying, you just need to work on your flow.