by Teria
Well written. I can't hardly critize it considering that it's lyrics and not a poem. Therefore the flow and all of that isn't quite how it would be in reality. I will say that you have great emotion and word choice. I think that you pieced this together quite well and as long as you know how to put songs together this will be an amazing song. |
Wow, I wanna hear this song! I can hear in my mind how it sounds, and it sounds great. There's some awesome imagery in here, which is very cool :D |
by Spirit
Only a few thing in life have been able to make me cry, while I was eating. |
by Rolo
Another winner in my book. My favorite thus far. |