Comments : Broken smile

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    What a fantastic poem you were describing my best freind who always helps me whenever i am in troubles.
    keep up. you are so talented

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    That was beautiful i hope you gave the poem to Jessy.She must be so proud to have a freind like you.well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    A really great write, glad you have such a friend, an angel in time of need, a shining star whenever in darkness. Really like the way the poem is really appreciating. Keep up