Wow, it is a wonderful poem.it is the same thing that happens to me by other people who love to hurt me.

The pain and destruction in this pain was greatly shown, i could feel the sadness.

This is a very strong poem, emotions are well expressed. So sad yet so wanting, i like your choice of words to explain such hurt. Nicely penned.

This is a very strong poem, emotions are well expressed. So sad yet so wanting, i like your choice of words to explain such hurt. Nicely penned.

The pain in this is so real, beautiful poem