I really like this one but with some fixing up it could be really great. I took the liberaty of fixing it up but you can just ignore it if you want.

When I look up at the stars every night and think of you,
My mind dazes of so that my imagination can run away and be with you,
But I only know that I had to say goodbye,
But please don’t tell me this is the last time,
I want you to be mine.

When I’m alone imagining that I’m surrounded by people,
I wonder weather your happy without me, but baby this isn’t the final goodbye,
Please tell me it’s not, because I could never live without you by my side,
This isn’t really goodbye.

And baby when I’m surrounded by my girls and I think of you,
I just daze off and they ask me what’s wrong with you,
And every time my answer is the same, ‘I’m in love with him’,
This is not my goodbye,
But just remember this baby, I love you for the rest of time.

after a few touch ups and grammar corrections and putting it into more stable stanza's it looks like that. if you dont like it whatever cuz it is your poem and you can do it however you like but these are just a few tips.

Any who i really love this poem and it really speaks to me. wonderful. 5/5. ~KM~