The poem was indeed a friendship poem i liked it^^. It lacked a little flow to me though but nice job truly.

Nice wording and all, but i agree that it needed more of a flow and the meaning was a bit dull to me. it was a bit confusing, sorry, and i think that you could have done a little better.

4/5

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Hey this is very beautifully write...without frnds life would be so dull... they form an important part
of our life...

"I sit back
my friends join
admiring beauty of
an unforgettable journey
called LIFE

We decide to get back
keeping memories by our side"

I loved this stanza... so beautifully written...It really made me miss my friends..

You could have added some more... but I suppose you liked it this way..

good job done... keep writing...

"Oh! I think
I [may] have skipped a beat
My mouth is choked
and my breath [is] stiff"
-I'll try giving you feedback. If you want to use it, go ahead. :] Okay, what I think you should insert I will always put in [ ] brackets. So make sure to check that.

"I sit back
my friends join
admiring beauty of
an unforgettable journey
called LIFE"

^_^I'm going to rewrite this below. Because I just don't like the way you worded it. I think you could have added more words along with it. You DON'T have to use my ideas! Remember that. :]

"I sit back, and my friends join in.
Together we admire the beauty of an unforgettable journey, called life."

^ Maybe you don't like it. But, I think it'd be OK, if you ended it with a sentence, such as this.

Sorry, I accidentally posted my comment too early. Haha. I had more to say. Anyway, I love the ending that you put there. The poem was good, it was short, it was a nice poem. However, those are just a few minor adjustments I would make myself if it was my poem. You don't have to use them. I just like to make suggestions. 5/5. Nice work.

The remembering is often times as pleasurable if not more, as this poem reflects on in fine style

Well done

Nice poem seems very good, but in my opinion between the lines "and give me some time
If not, give me" it seems to rub kinda weird like it's missing something