Comments : Do You Breathe Me?

  • 16 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    I Loooooooooooooooooooved it....can totally relate to it !

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    So many emotions and feelings. :] I love this poem a ton. Don't you hate it when you're feeling distant from someone and you struggle to figure out exactly why? I wrote a poem like that, I'm sure you commented it! But, man.. I love this poem so much XD You did a excellent job rhyming also. :] The flow was spectacular. XD way to go.. 5/5