Inside

by Asher   Jun 8, 2008


***this is the basic blue print for this poem comment ideas or tips to make this idea to a real poem***

I feel dead,
my body harden,
and is cold as lead,
my head spinning,
as he breathes inside of me,
he choked me,
and dug he claws in,
i cried screamed,
as he rips open my skin,
this is it,
this is my end,
As my demon wakes up,
the pain starts over again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by coolaziz

    Yeah it is a nice structure though it is a little painful

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This seems like a great structure to base a poem on, nice work
    =]