Aww..really sad...

umm..i think this would work out better in stanzas, but i still love it...good job..Aly

I hope youre still venting britt....i know its hard but he's just a typical jojo ya know? hes just blinded because well you have edward, members??? good one buddy...try to get ova it. 5/5

Lol loisa,myy life isnt half that depressing. haha. i jus exxagerate when i writee. dont worry im not still in that mode. =>>

Oh wow. i like that. i didnt think it was going to be good idk just cuz lol but it was. good job.

Very emotional poem. The heart ache was beautiful. Well written.